Index: pack.xml
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RCS  /repository/phpdoc/en/reference/misc/functions/pack.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.10 pack.xml
--- pack.xml    20 Jun 2007 22:24:57 -0000      1.10
+++ pack.xml    4 Mar 2008 18:26:35 -0000
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@
    <parameter>format</parameter>.
   </para>
   <para>
-   The idea to this function was taken from Perl and all formatting codes
-   work the same as there, however, there are some formatting codes that are
+   The idea for this function was taken from Perl and all formatting codes
+   work the same as in Perl   However, there are some formatting codes that are
    missing such as Perl's "u" format code.
   </para>
   <para>
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
   </para>
   <para>
    Also note that PHP internally stores <type>integer</type> values as
-   signed values of a machine dependent size. If you give it an unsigned
+   signed values of a machine-dependent size. If you give it an unsigned
    integer value too large to be stored that way it is converted to a
    <type>float</type> which often yields an undesired result.
   </para>