Re: [HEADSUP] Call for help
| From: | Daniel Brown | Date: | Sun, 05 Jul 2009 00:53:57 +0000 |
| Subject: | Re: [HEADSUP] Call for help | ||
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On Sat, Jul 4, 2009 at 20:06, Hannes
Magnusson<hannes.magnusson@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> I would really appreciate if an native-English speaker could read over
> it.
Native or non-native, Hannes, your English is better than a good
majority of Americans - allegedly "English" folks as well - with whom
I deal on a regular basis. Still, there are a couple of minor changes
and some typofixes herein. My only real question is if we want to
leave the "kick-ass" portion in there, since it's going on the main
page, or if we'd want to approach it with a slightly more professional
tenor. I don't think it's inappropriate to a level of being obscene,
but maybe a bit abrasive.
Regardless, the new XML is attached. It may have ^M's on your
system, since I'm working on a Windows box right now. (Kalle, if you
happen to read this, I don't want to hear it. ;-P)
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