Re: Documentation update
| From: | Braian Iván Monnier | Date: | Wed, 05 Jan 2011 22:52:56 +0000 |
| Subject: | Re: Documentation update | ||
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Thank you for you quick response, Daniel. I changed "listed" because I found
it a little confusing and repeating, but now that you tell me that, I
realize you are right. Thank you again!
Monnier, Braian Iván.
On 5 January 2011 19:22, Daniel Brown <danbrown@php.net> wrote:
> On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 17:09, Braian Iván Monnier <x1v4nx@php.net> wrote:
> > Hello everybody.
> >
> > Can anyone take a look at this update, please? It's the first time I've
> done
> > a doc update and I'm not sure if I did it correctly. Thanks in advance!
> >
> > Monnier, Braian Iván.
> >
>
> The patch looks good, but I would reword this:
>
> "but it is appointed through the mhash documentation"
>
> To this:
>
> "but it is listed in the mhash documentation"
>
> More similar to the original, really, because if it is "appointed
> through" something, that would mean it was designated by the
> documentation, as if the documentation directed the code, and not the
> other way around.
>
> Other than that, looks like you're good to commit.
>
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