svn: /web/php/trunk/ index-beta.php
| From: | Stewart Lord | Date: | Wed, 13 Jul 2011 05:41:40 +0000 |
| Subject: | svn: /web/php/trunk/ index-beta.php | ||
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stewartlord Wed, 13 Jul 2011 05:41:40 +0000
Revision: http://svn.php.net/viewvc?view=revision&revision=313196
Log:
Some copy edits to the featured content sections.
Changed paths:
U web/php/trunk/index-beta.php
Modified: web/php/trunk/index-beta.php
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--- web/php/trunk/index-beta.php 2011-07-13 05:31:42 UTC (rev 313195)
+++ web/php/trunk/index-beta.php 2011-07-13 05:41:40 UTC (rev 313196)
@@ -117,10 +117,10 @@
<span class=graphic></span>
<h2>Get Involved!</h2>
<p>
- Getting involved with PHP is easier then many think.
- Are you interested in getting involved with one of the worlds most used
- scripting languages? We are looking for all sort of people,
- not only developers.
+ Getting involved with PHP is easier than you think.
+ Are you interested in helping to improve one of the world's most
+ widely used scripting languages? We are looking for all sorts
+ of people, not only developers.
<a href='/get-involved.php' class='readmore'>Read
more...</a>
</p>
</div>
@@ -128,9 +128,9 @@
<span class=graphic></span>
<h2>Need Help?</h2>
<p>
- Everyone needs help every once in a while, and finding it can sometimes
- be very hard.
- Thankfully, PHP has one of the greatest support communities out there.
+ Everyone needs a little help from time to time, and finding it
+ isn't always easy. Thankfully, PHP has one of the best support
+ communities out there.
<a href='/support.php' class='readmore'>Read
more...</a>
</p>
</div>
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
<span class=graphic></span>
<h2>PECL + PEAR</h2>
<p>
- Is PHP missing a feature you need? No worries.
+ Is PHP missing a feature you need? No worries!
PHP has a large extension library called
<abbr title='The PHP Extension Community Library'><a href='http://pecl.php.net/'>PECL</a></abbr>,
and a reusable class library called
@@ -150,9 +150,10 @@
<span class=graphic></span>
<h2>Website Tips/Tricks</h2>
<p>
- Everything has
an app these days. Even the PHP manual.
- We also have all sorts of <a href='/tips.php'>tricks</a>
available to safe few extra
- keystrokes and shave off we seconds..
+ Everything has 'an app' these days, even the PHP manual.
+ We also have <a href='/tips.php'>tips and tricks</a>
+ to save you keystrokes and shave a few seconds off the next
+ time you need to look up needle/haystack argument order!
</p>
</div>
<br style='clear: both;' />