com web/php: Language improvements (thanks Peter!): docs.php download-docs.php manual/php4.php

Commit: 62a4b96aed1cd1c2a3ace6058bf9c96f9ad6e433 Author: Sobak <msobaczewski@gmail.com> Sun, 17 Aug 2014 20:58:54 +0200 Parents: 91a0093392f588682580bf43293e9a2c062f440b Branches: master Link: http://git.php.net/?p=web/php.git;a=commitdiff;h=62a4b96aed1cd1c2a3ace6058bf9c96f9ad6e433 Log: Language improvements (thanks Peter!) Changed paths: M docs.php M download-docs.php M manual/php4.php Diff: diff --git a/docs.php b/docs.php index 0be6988..9638b6e 100644 --- a/docs.php +++ b/docs.php @@ -29,10 +29,10 @@ site_header("Documentation", array("current" => "docs")); <div class="warning"> <p> - Documentation for PHP 4 is currently being removed from the + Documentation for PHP 4 has been removed from the manual, but there is archived version still available. For more informations, please read <a href="/manual/php4.php"> - this explanation</a>.. + Documentation for PHP 4</a>. </p> </div> </div> @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ foreach ($ACTIVE_ONLINE_LANGUAGES as $langcode => $langname) { packages</a> can be found on a separate server. </li> <li> - If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, plase read <a href="/manual/php4.php"> + If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, please read <a href="/manual/php4.php"> this explanation</a>. </li> <li> diff --git a/download-docs.php b/download-docs.php index b8ecd7c..f0167b0 100644 --- a/download-docs.php +++ b/download-docs.php @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ $formats = array( are not complete, and contain English parts. </li> <li> - If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, plase read + If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, please read <a href="/manual/php4.php">this explanation</a>. </li> </ul> diff --git a/manual/php4.php b/manual/php4.php index 76664fe..c4d9ca3 100644 --- a/manual/php4.php +++ b/manual/php4.php @@ -10,20 +10,20 @@ site_header('PHP Version 4 Documentation'); <p> The PHP 4 documentation was removed from the PHP Manual in August 2014, approximately six years after PHP 4 reached its end of life. However, we have - provided downloadable copy of manual for anyone who would need it. + provided downloadable copies of the manual for anyone who would need it. </p> <h2>PHP 4 Manual</h2> <p> - An attempt was made to preserve as many documentation related to PHP 4, as it is - possible. Despite this, we don't have nice, separate manual covering only PHP 4. - The reason for this is how our documentation is structured. Even so, archived copy - describes more ascpets of PHP 4 than actual manual described in August 2014 (e.g. + An attempt has been made to preserve as much documentation related to PHP 4, as + possible. Despite this, we don't have a nice, separate manual covering only PHP 4. + The reason for this is how our documentation is structured.. Even so, the archived copy + describes more aspects of PHP 4 than actual manual described in August 2014 (e.g. it covers more PHP 4 extensions). </p> <p> - To download copy of the manual for PHP 4, see the <a href="http://doc.php.net/archives/"> + To download a copy of the manual for PHP 4, see the <a href="http://doc.php.net/archives/"> documentation archives</a>. Please, remember, that archived version <strong>should not </strong> be used in everyday development, unless you are developing PHP 4 applications. This version lacks many topics connected with PHP 5 and it is not updated anymore. @@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ site_header('PHP Version 4 Documentation'); <h2>Migrating to PHP 5</h2> <p> All users are strongly encouraged to upgrade their environments to PHP 5. - Please, read guide for <a href="http://php.net/manual/en/migration5.php">Migrating + Please, read our guides for <a href="http://php.net/manual/en/migration5.php">Migrating from PHP 4 to PHP 5.0.x</a> and <a href="http://php.net/manual/en/faq.migration5.php"> - Migrating from PHP 4 to PHP 5 FAQ</a>, for more informations. + Migrating from PHP 4 to PHP 5 FAQ</a>, for more information. </p> <?php