com web/php: Minor language cleanup: my.php

Commit: 2117b37953708d7a2849eac1568d0e612233eb7e Author: Rasmus Lerdorf <rasmus@php.net> Thu, 13 Nov 2014 23:41:27 -0800 Parents: 03821e6babc963a5653dcfbf54c6820047bdafaa Branches: master Link: http://git.php.net/?p=web/php.git;a=commitdiff;h=2117b37953708d7a2849eac1568d0e612233eb7e Log: Minor language cleanup Changed paths: M my.php Diff: diff --git a/my.php b/my.php index 15d4239..6524cb4 100644 --- a/my.php +++ b/my.php @@ -75,8 +75,7 @@ site_header("My PHP.net", array("current" => "community")); <h1>My PHP.net</h1> <p> - This page allows you to customize the PHP.net site to some degree - to your own liking. + This page allows you to customize the PHP.net site. </p> <?php if (!is_official_mirror()) { ?> @@ -88,9 +87,8 @@ site_header("My PHP.net", array("current" => "community")); </p> <?php } else { ?> <p> - These settings will be active on all official PHP.net mirror sites, - and are stored using cookies, so you need to have cookies enabled - to let your settings work. + These settings are cookie-based and will work on all official PHP.net + mirror sites.. </p> <?php } ?> @@ -101,7 +99,7 @@ site_header("My PHP.net", array("current" => "community")); is determined by checking for the following settings. The list is in priority order, the first is the most important. Normally you don't need to set your preferred language, as your last seen language is - always remembered, and is a good estimate on your preferred language + always remembered, and is a good estimate of your preferred language most of the time. </p> @@ -145,7 +143,7 @@ foreach ($langinfo as $lin => $lid) { </p> <p> - The language setting is honored when you use an + The language setting is honored when you use a <a href="/urlhowto.php">URL shortcut</a>, when you start a function list search on a non-manual page, when you visit the <a href="/download-docs.php">manual download</a> or @@ -176,7 +174,7 @@ if (i2c_valid_country()) { <h2>URL search fallback</h2> <p> - When you try to access a PHP.net page via an URL shortcut, and + When you try to access a PHP.net page via a URL shortcut, and the site is unable to find that particular page, it falls back to a documentation search, or a function list lookup, depending on your choice. The default is a function list lookup, as most of @@ -250,7 +248,7 @@ foreach ($mirror_sites as $murl => $mdata) { <h2>User Group tips</h2> <p> -We are experimenting with listing near by User Groups. This feature is highly experimental +We are experimenting with listing nearby user groups. This feature is highly experimental and will very likely change a lot and be broken at times. </p> <label for="showugenable">Enable UG tips</label> <input type="radio" name="showug" id="showugenable" value="enable" <?php echo myphpnet_showug() ? "checked=checked" : "" ?>><br>