cvs: phpweb /archive 2008.xml
| From: | Hannes Magnusson | Date: | Tue, 29 Jul 2008 22:16:50 +0000 |
| Subject: | cvs: phpweb /archive 2008.xml | ||
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bjori Tue Jul 29 22:16:50 2008 UTC
Modified files:
/phpweb/archive 2008.xml
Log:
Rephrasing (patch by Alex Songe, thanks!!)
http://cvs.php.net/viewvc.cgi/phpweb/archive/2008.xml?r1=1.38&r2=1.39&diff_format=u
Index: phpweb/archive/2008.xml
diff -u phpweb/archive/2008.xml:1.38 phpweb/archive/2008.xml:1.39
--- phpweb/archive/2008.xml:1.38 Tue Jul 29 21:52:10 2008
+++ phpweb/archive/2008.xml Tue Jul 29 22:16:48 2008
@@ -21,27 +21,27 @@
<content type="xhtml">
<div xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
<p>
- Few weeks ago the <a href="/manual">manual</a> was restructured,
- hopefully improving navigation and making room for
+ A few weeks ago the <a href="/manual">manual</a> was restructured
+ to improve navigation and make room for
<a href="/pdo.prepared-statements">per-extension chapters</a>
and <a href="/haru.examples">usage examples</a> along with
<a href="/class.xmlreader">improved documentation</a> for
<a href="/oop5/">object oriented</a> extensions.
</p>
<p>
- Most noticable changes are the <a href="/funcref">function
reference</a>,
+ The most noticable changes are the <a href="/funcref">function
reference</a>,
<a href="/reserved.variables">predefined variables</a>,
<a href="/context">context options and parameters</a> and
- <a href="/reserved.exceptions">predefined exceptions</a> manul pages,
- which <a href="/contact">we would really appreciate feedback</a> on.
+ <a href="/reserved.exceptions">predefined exceptions</a> manual
pages,
+ for which <a href="/contact">we would really appreciate feedback</a>
on.
</p>
<p>
- Now with the upcomming PHP5.3 release, which introduces
+ The upcomming PHP5.3 release introduces
<a href="http://wiki.php.net/doc/scratchpad/upgrade/53">several
major features</a>
such as <a href="/namespaces">namespaces</a>, closures,
<a href="/lsb">late static bindings</a>, <a
href="/intl">internationalization functions</a>,
- <a href="/ini.sections">INI sections</a>, <a
href="/phar">Phar</a>..., we would really
- appreciate any and all help we can get improving the documentations.
+ <a href="/ini.sections">INI sections</a>, and <a
href="/phar">Phar</a> among others.
+ We would really appreciate any and all help we can get improving the documentation.
</p>
<p>
In related news, the manual was relicensed recently and is now