Doc #69502 [Opn->Ver]: Proofreading needed on "Sessions and security" page

Edit report at https://bugs.php.net/bug.php?id=69502&edit=1 ID: 69502 Updated by: cmb@php.net Reported by: aaronw at catalyst dot net dot nz Summary: Proofreading needed on "Sessions and security" page -Status: Open +Status: Verified Type: Documentation Problem Package: Documentation problem PHP Version: Irrelevant Block user comment: N Private report: N Previous Comments: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ [2015-04-22 05:54:11] aaronw at catalyst dot net dot nz Description: ------------ --- From manual page: http://www.php.net/session.security --- The text of this page has grammar errors in pretty much every sentence. The first paragraph is a good example: "HTTP session management is core of web security. All of mitigation should be adopted to make sure session security. Developer should enable/use applicable settings appropriately." It could use a sweep by a copy editor. I would use the online editor to submit a patch for the page, but some sections of the page are a bit confusing, and I don't know enough about session security to be confident that my edits wouldn't introduce factual errors. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ -- Edit this bug report at https://bugs.php.net/bug.php?id=69502&edit=1