Doc #69502 [Ver->Csd]: Proofreading needed on "Sessions and security" page

Edit report at https://bugs.php.net/bug.php?id=69502&edit=1 ID: 69502 Updated by: peehaa@php.net Reported by: aaronw at catalyst dot net dot nz Summary: Proofreading needed on "Sessions and security" page -Status: Verified +Status: Closed Type: Documentation Problem Package: Documentation problem PHP Version: Irrelevant Assigned To: peehaa Block user comment: N Private report: N New Comment: This bug has been fixed in the documentation's XML sources. Since the online and downloadable versions of the documentation need some time to get updated, we would like to ask you to be a bit patient. Thank you for the report, and for helping us make our documentation better. Previous Comments: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ [2015-04-22 05:54:11] aaronw at catalyst dot net dot nz Description: ------------ --- From manual page: http://www.php.net/session.security --- The text of this page has grammar errors in pretty much every sentence. The first paragraph is a good example: "HTTP session management is core of web security. All of mitigation should be adopted to make sure session security. Developer should enable/use applicable settings appropriately." It could use a sweep by a copy editor. I would use the online editor to submit a patch for the page, but some sections of the page are a bit confusing, and I don't know enough about session security to be confident that my edits wouldn't introduce factual errors. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ -- Edit this bug report at https://bugs.php.net/bug.php?id=69502&edit=1