Re: cvs: phpdoc /en/language namespaces.xml
| From: | Edward Z. Yang | Date: | Thu, 15 Nov 2007 21:29:24 +0000 |
| Subject: | Re: cvs: phpdoc /en/language namespaces.xml | ||
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Etienne Kneuss wrote:
> Initial version of namespace docs (Stanislav)
Whoo! A few comments:
- "Namespaces overview" is redundant: "Overview" should be fine
- xml:id for the first section is langauge.namespaces.rationale, whereas
the title is "Namespaces overview": which is it? Overview implies a
quick rundown of the functionality of namespaces
- "he must" is gender-biased
- Same namespace name => possibly "The same namespace name"
- "but no free code" is a fragment, expand to "but it cannot contain
free code"
[snip]
Maybe I ought to commit the grammar changes myself, if you don't mind?
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