Re: Re: cvs: phpdoc /en/language namespaces.xml

Hi, Sure go ahead, that was the point of commiting a first version, so I could bring other people in ;) On Nov 15, 2007 10:29 PM, Edward Z. Yang <edwardzyang@thewritingpot.com> wrote: > Etienne Kneuss wrote: > > Initial version of namespace docs (Stanislav) > > Whoo! A few comments: > > - "Namespaces overview" is redundant: "Overview" should be fine > - xml:id for the first section is langauge.namespaces.rationale, whereas > the title is "Namespaces overview": which is it? Overview implies a > quick rundown of the functionality of namespaces > - "he must" is gender-biased > - Same namespace name => possibly "The same namespace name" > - "but no free code" is a fragment, expand to "but it cannot contain > free code" > [snip] > > Maybe I ought to commit the grammar changes myself, if you don't mind? > > -- > Edward Z. Yang GnuPG: 0x869C48DA > HTML Purifier <http://htmlpurifier.org> Anti-XSS Filter > [[ 3FA8 E9A9 7385 B691 A6FC B3CB A933 BE7D 869C 48DA ]] > > -- > PHP Documentation Commits Mailing List (http://www.php.net/) > To unsubscribe, visit: http://www.php.net/unsub.php > > -- Etienne Kneuss http://www.colder.ch Men never do evil so completely and cheerfully as when they do it from a religious conviction. -- Pascal