Re: cvs: phpdoc /en/reference/simplexml reference.xml

From: Date: Fri, 06 Feb 2004 20:19:40 +0000
Subject: Re: cvs: phpdoc /en/reference/simplexml reference.xml
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Mike Ford wrote:
On 06 February 2004 17:40, Mehdi Achour wrote:
@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@
      <simpara>
       So far, we have only covered the work of reading element names
       and their values. SimpleXML can also access element
attributes. -       Access attributes of an element just as you would elements of
-       an <type>array</type>.
+       Access attributes of an element just as you would
access elements
+       of an <type>array</type>.
      </simpara>
Sorry, but this is one where the original was better English. Although the additional "access" is not syntactically incorrect, it makes the sentence read awkwardly and I doubt many native English speakers would include it.
I thought this sentence was missing something :) What about "just as you would do it for the elements of an <type>array</type>" ? Tank you for your correction anyway ! didou - french fries

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